The design is incredibly strong! If you want to tinker with it I have some suggestions:
- take out the black outline around the girl - move the bursts of color behind the tagline, so no one thinks the girl has cosmic farts - use a different layout for the tagline that's more compact, so that it still stands out from the shapes behind it but doesn't cover as much of it.
Just some ideas. Wonderful work! Please see mine at [link] Thank you!
You really know your way around concept development! I still don't feel confident with colors and formats beyond my humble sketches yet, but you really seem to have a grasp of the retro-future style. It's energetic without being too busy, yet still maintains a strong balance between the person and the background.
Blah blah fancy talk for 'I like your pictures and colors'.